至急 英検準一級の英作文の添削をしていただけないでしょうか。 Topic Should the government do more to encourage young people to vote in elections? Essay Personally, I think that the government should do more to encourage young people to vote in elections for the following two reasons. First of all, it enhances young people's social responsibility. They often behave as if they have no responsibility. For example, they litter garbage in public areas. Then, if they start to vote in elections, they recognize that they are adults, and it surely leads to reduce their problematic behaviors. Second of all, it is important for young people to understand freedom of choice. Nowadays, while the government is making an effort to hear young people's voice, they only tweet claims about the government and give up taking action. Knowing that they have freedom of choice by voting, the society will become better. For these reasons, I believe that the government should promote young people to vote in elections.